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The tables will be set up by the parks department at 8am, and the sign-up sheet was created by Maria last week." }, { "kind": "repeated word", "line": 3, "found": "last", "suggestion": "use it once, or swap one for a synonym or pronoun", "context": "" }, { "kind": "filler", "line": 5, "found": "very", "suggestion": "cut, or keep only if it changes the meaning", "context": "Due to the fact that last year's swap was very very crowded, we have basically decided to open the doors at 9 instead of 10, which we think should help spread people out across the morning and also give the early bird..." }, { "kind": "filler", "line": 5, "found": "very", "suggestion": "cut, or keep only if it changes the meaning", "context": "Due to the fact that last year's swap was very very crowded, we have basically decided to open the doors at 9 instead of 10, which we think should help spread people out across the morning and also give the early bird..." }, { "kind": "filler", "line": 5, "found": "basically", "suggestion": "cut, or keep only if it changes the meaning", "context": "Due to the fact that last year's swap was very very crowded, we have basically decided to open the doors at 9 instead of 10, which we think should help spread people out across the morning and also give the early bird..." }, { "kind": "wordy", "line": 5, "found": "Due to the fact that", "suggestion": "because", "context": "Due to the fact that last year's swap was very very crowded, we have basically decided to open the doors at 9 instead of 10, which we think should help spread people out across the morning and also give the early bird..." }, { "kind": "doubled word", "line": 5, "found": "very very", "suggestion": "very", "context": "Due to the fact that last year's swap was very very crowded, we have basically decided to open the doors at 9 instead of 10, which we think should help spread people out across the morning and also give the early bird..." }, { "kind": "wordy", "line": 7, "found": "Each and every", "suggestion": "every", "context": "Please bring your plants in labeled pots. 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